Score: 7

"Few things should be improved"

submission: Sonic:Clone Attack

date: August 1, 2006

Here are some thoughts, maybe you will find them useful:
Instead of writing the text on the background, make white textboxes and use the letters of lower size, also instead of writing the name of the character you could put the head of the character next to the text.
The background is too big - the characters are too small, they could look bigger on the screen, maybe not as big as in fight scene and sonic kick scene, but somewhere close to that.
One basic movie element is missing - replay button.
And about spelling,.. I won't say anything, I have problems with it too. :D
Good luck at making episode two. :)

Score: 8

"Best one in the series."

submission: Break in and your fired 3

date: May 3, 2006

Had to watch the previous two episodes to get the rigth impression of what kind of animation this is. And,.. I noticed that every new part gets better and better. For instance in the first one you could hear noizes in the background of the speaker and there were no other charachters in the scene.
Second episode, new character showed up, which was missing in the first part, that's the guy living in the house. But the outlook of that black guy wasn't very good, because he was drawn in a different style from Donald.
Also, better music was used in the part number two.
And this new one, the third, nicely done if talkink about the characters. But still the environment looks like it has been used from the second episode without improvement, maybe some changes will be done in the next episodes, but,.. since Donald was shot in this episode, does it mean that this is the end of the series? :) I hope not! Good luck at making episode 4! ;)

Score: 9

"LoL"

submission: Card Game

date: May 2, 2006

The ending was great! :D I bet you're gonna get a high mark, because this animation perfectly fits to the 'A moment of Madness or Joy' theme. :)
Damn, I haven't noticed that all cards were aces too... ;| I guess, only Chuck Norris is able notice that.. ;)